reflectoin for my cyberbullying rough draft video

Based upon the feedback comments I have read, I now fully understand the pros and cons of my group's video, and the areas we need to work on. I noticed many comments suggested adjusting the volume of the film. Looking back to the video I now also understand what my peers are talking about, and I now know to keep that in mind in the future. I also noticed comments about some of our interviewees, and how they can be adjusted or maybe even cut. I'm glad to see that my peers enjoyed the clip of my sister, the girl on the computer at home. I'm overall satisfied with people's reaction to the video. I would like to thank people for pointing out things such as grammar, and what fits in with the video and what doesn't. I now can see what areas of my video need to be adjusted, and I plan on doing the best I can to achieve the best video I can make.